Oh this pain that I know so well. I feel so deeply sorry that you know this pain enough to express it so poignantly here. I wish you peace and that you know you made the right decision.

You expressed that very well.

Inna

The confusion of love and its demise well told here. Great picture to go with it as well.

Well expressed, I know that feeling all well myself Liane. Very well written as usual my dear friend.

God Bless and take care

Most of us have experienced this pain. You have puts words to it. The biggest problem in this situation is not knnowing the truth.

Nice work as usual. Tragic yet romantic.

OMG I’m in love this is beautiful my # is — — —-

Very nice, romantic, and I can go on adding more “if” since the flow is so inspiring..

It touched my heart and reminded me about a story of 10 years ago. Good work

Wow! very romantic.

Very romantic and very heartbreaking.

I like the poem very much. Pain and heartache usely run together when your heart has broken. I’ve lost a love once that I wish I could have gotten back…thank you for your writing….s.m.blomker

Such a wonderful piece! I can sincereley relate to this!

Sad poem, love lost is hard but love not understood is worse.

I loved it.

I want to put music to this one. Soft Rock or Easy Listening perhaps.
Good job, Liane.

I really like this Great expression

your work is full of emotions. great work!

wow…
very well written, and i could just feel it.

This was really moving. Thank you for sharing

Liane, you are beautiful as you are and should not change for anyone but yourself. When we try to meet others expectations we lose ourselves. It is better to lose someone else than to lose you.

I love your poem.

Take car & God bless.

Nice rhyme. I really liked the comma after the if. Punctuation is a great way to build rhythms and give the reader space to breath.

Well done . j

love is this
love is bliss
put in beat
like that of heart
made to pain and tear you apart
luctus corvus

This is something that is easy to relate to. Good job of expressing it.

This is a great poem,
very beautifully written,
Definately heart touching

Hi, Liane, how are you?
Wow, I like this poem a lot, it has some truly heart-breaking lines, good job!

Wow, Your in a league of your own. You have definately have a talent for poetry as this poem brought tears to my eyes. Anything be it a book or a movie if it makes you laugh or cry then it is mere perfection. You have successfully moved us all.
With love and blessings,
Love Shelley.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

It’s a graet poem,very touching,I loved it.

Lonesome… romantic poem…

I can relate to those feelings well and how it wreaks havoc on
the heart. It is powerfully written and elevates from line
to line.

Wonderful poem. Filled with emotion. Loved it.

Very beautiful.

Quite Lovely.

I have felt this way, as well as leaving other in smoldering in this path. Very much felt.

it struck a chord.

OMG! I just love your poems!! =>
THat was the best love poem I think I have EVER read!
Keep it up =)

Tragically beautiful. Great work as always Liane!!!

this can relate to just about everyone i know me deffinatly. well expressed. great pictures!

Simple, beautiful but painful too. Good job, Liane

I thought you’re talking to me! ) Nice work, I felt shivers down my spine…

nice work , it was good

What i lovely poem! I should say you are a very talanted writer! No wonder you get soo many views. May everything workout right for both of you!
Please keep writing

way to go, beautiful write!

Loved the poem. It was very well written and very colorful. Great job.

The pain in this really comes across, great job *hugs*

Like many others have said here,I know this one too.You said it all so well,and were strong enough to share this with others.This is a pain that only you can know the measure of.

Wow! Me know all so well…. it sucks…. but the poem was written so nicely. I enjoyed it.

Beautiful poem, Liane. I’ve been there so I know how you feel.

Very nice… I so can relate to this poem *sigh*.

This poem is absolutely terrific! I especially liked the way you were able to convey so much emotion practically solely through questions. I also like the language very much, so simple and direct and perfect for getting the point across.

I am relatively new here and am just browsing through the poems and yours really touched me. A great poem!

right! It’s a great poem.

Completely moved!!

I have a similar situation and I was absolutely moved!

very touching! Seems like someone out there is breaking your heart. Im very sorry if thats the case!!!

What guy in his right mind would not want you?!? Look at all the love directed at you in these comments (not to mention all the other poems/articles) Whoever this guy is HE\’S the one missing out!
Or maybe he\’s intimidated by your level of intelligence, beauty commitment, or any number of other insecurities we all have.
I\’ve never even met you and I love you!!! ~

Wow Liane,73 “I like its” 74 w/ mine. You have such charisma in your writing it almost doesn’t matter what you write about, it’s always you in the words you use and the feeling you portray. It’s like anyone that reads what you have, has an immediate assosiative understanding and compasion for you, the person, even more than that which you write about because, honestly, that’s was the 1st thing I perceived when I first read one of your many, many writings and, I am sure, this is only the tip of all that is YOU, an honest, sincere, passive yet convincingly strong heart and mind put forth as the soul of love. I’m w/ homeboy TommyP in that how could anyone not love you except someone out of his tree (a fallen nut?) and, yes I do personally have much love for you and all you are. God keep on blessing you for you have much work to do pushing all that love, out into a world that is bereft of love and compassion, through your writings; empathy over apathy will conquer all!

Sincere Love,

Tim

another lovely piece of poetry,you are well-loved,keep it up

Awesome! Truly deep and real world stuff. I felt it. Keep up the good work.

Its a sweet lovely thing to be in love. take care, Ruby

I like the street Grafiti..

i so wish i could turn back time as i fear my relationship is going to end up there, hes becoming all sexual and less loving oh im startring to think i liked it better when he lied to me
i love him i worship him and im only waiting for him to show me the same, hes strying and he nvr notices when he slips back into his old self but i fear tat he’ll forget wat true love is again when hes just found it

Very nice! I like your clean use of rhyme. It usually is not that big a deal to rhyme, but you have a good style.

What a beautiful poem, Liane! Keep up the great work.

~Ellen

“Awesome! Truly deep and real world stuff. I felt it. Keep up the good work.”

I agree completely

I really enjoyed reading your poem.

Another fine piece, with great pictures too.

as always, this is another blockbuster hit!!!

Lovely poem Liane. It sounds very similar to something I went through last month and I understand how painful and confusing it is.

Liane,
This is absolutely beautiful, and heart breaking. It made me want to cry. Excellent job!!! Keep up the great work.

Randy

read my love poems you will find the way to earn your beloved`s love

Great! The story of my marriage! Inspiring, and thoughts for me to ponder on.

Really good job!

very nice, I really liked it

i the poem is great. thats exactly how i feel about this one guy.

I feel that

I really feel for you through this poem. So sad yet so beautiful.

Christine

I thought it was a beautiful use of poetry. nice work

This was very good and I very much enjoyed reading it. You r a good writer. I liked it. Good picture choices also btw.

And thank youf for commenting some of my stuff. It means alot to me.

Just beautiful x

Poetry at it’s best! This truly is a pouring out of heart write.

This is wonderful, and beautiful, and hear-wrenching all at once. I can feel the emotion of this piece beating in my own heart!

Absolutely perfect.

Yours truly,

Eva Ohil

Point well taken, and I am glad you included this link in another article, or I would have missed this poem.

That was beautiful poem. Very ell written and I love the picture of the half of heart.a-girl-on-a-mission

This is the exact pain i feel, i wish i would know if he loves me too…want him to be my other half, make the pain go away, as he is the one….for me

wish he lets me know, the pain is so much, and can not let go, only if i would know if he feels the same as what i feel too…

XTREMELY,

WONDERFUL MY REGARDS TOO
LH

I liked this, not sure about the last bit after the picture, i don.t think you need this.