This is poem about feeling ugly and worthless. please read and leave comments telling me what you think and you can vote if you like. it would be very much appreciated. thank you.

maybe if i were beautiful
you would love me more
maybe if i were beautiful
you wouldn’t have walked out the door
maybe if i were beautiful
you would have said yes
maybe if i were beautiful
you would have hated me less
maybe if i were beautiful
you wouldn’t have broken my heart
maybe if i were beautiful
you would’ve giving me the chance to start
maybe if i were beautiful
you wouldn’t have giving into despair
maybe if i were beautiful
you would have noticed me there
maybe if i were beautiful
you wouldn’t have taken me away
maybe if i were beautiful
you would have let me stay
maybe if i were beautiful
you wouldn’t have teased me
maybe if i were beautiful
you would have let me grieve
maybe if i were beautiful
you would have paid my mind
maybe if i were beautiful
you would have spared me time
maybe if i were beautiful
i would have put up a fight
maybe if i were beautiful
i wouldn’t have taken my life.

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Comments (3)
  • live and lovin life on Jul 6, 2009

    Nicely written…

  • Tiny on Apr 9, 2011

    Absolutely love it, I’m crying right now…

  • tonyleather on May 19, 2011

    brilliant, ans so very true. Well done.

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