What if I were to die…

If I were to die today,
Would you remember me?
Knowing what my brown eyes see?

If I were to die today,
Would you know that I loved you?
Gazing only at your eyes so blue?

If I were to die today,
Would you be able to comprehend?
Why my life came to an end?

If I were to die today,
Would you know my name?
Saying it without any shame?

If I were to die today,
Would you love me anyway?
Knowing full well the price I had to pay?

If I were to die today,
Would you just hold me in your arms?
And say, “I love you, too.”

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  • drelayaraja on Nov 2, 2010

    Very touching lines….

  • Melody SJAL on Nov 2, 2010

    Oh, how touching.

  • Jewelstar on Nov 2, 2010

    why you guys frightening me of death? :(

    There was someone else who shared a topic ‘how to die’

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 2, 2010

    This is very romantic and very sad.

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 2, 2010

    Beautiful and heartfelt.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 2, 2010

    A very moving piece.

    Christine

  • Atanacio on Nov 2, 2010

    I really enjoyed this Sunshine in other words Great Share

  • ShiningStar on Nov 2, 2010

    great share, thanks

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 2, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • J M Lennox on Nov 10, 2010

    Beautiful.

  • Erin Miller on Feb 14, 2011

    I absolutely love this piece!

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