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If I Were to Write a Haiku About You..

sandcastle on Aug 22, 2010
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A lovers Haiku.

Haiku  1

bouquet of flowers
makes me hum and makes me want
to go home at once


Haiku  2

a kitten
a homing pigeon
my husband

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  • giftarist on Aug 22, 2010

    Great pieces. Lovely.

  • Brewed Coffee on Aug 22, 2010

    It amazes me, this kind of poem by the Japanese…how you can communicate so much with very few words….I like your haikus very much

  • Ethics0006 on Aug 22, 2010

    Great Poem

  • bryeunade on Aug 23, 2010

    How sweet naman. A few lines said with a meaning of a thousand words. Nice..

  • PSingh1990 on Aug 23, 2010

    nice one…

    thanks for share.

  • buenavida on Aug 23, 2010

    Thanks for sharing, have to learn to write haiku..!:)

  • John Cornor on Aug 23, 2010

    So lovely.Great post.

  • carissimi on Aug 23, 2010

    these are very sweet..

  • papaleng on Aug 24, 2010

    two romantic Haikus, parang gusto ko ulit bumalik sa stage na ganito..lol

  • LOVELYHONEY on Aug 25, 2010

    5 7 5

    SO TAUGHT MY MASTER

    I learnt the scheme once

    hope i’m not dunce

    ur haiku i understood at once
    gr8 added u as frnd hope u 22222

  • LOVELYHONEY on Aug 25, 2010

    5 7 5

    SO TAUGHT MY MASTER

    I learnt the scheme once

    hope i\\\’m not dunce

    ur haiku i understood at once
    gr8 added u as frnd hope u 22222

  • Joseph Scott on Aug 25, 2010

    “to go home at once”.. well put! Good Haiku’s.

  • sandcastle on Aug 31, 2010

    Thank you for taking the time to leave your comments, guys.Thank you for your warmth.

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