The things it would say.

Some work there whole life’s just to get me
Most wouldn’t hesitate to try and counterfeit me
Men have killed for my glories and in turn lost there life’s
I fuel all your wars I gladly create strife
I have made poor men rich and change rich men to poor
Sometimes if your lucky Ill be found on the floor
I’m always on your mind no matter what time of day
You hate to love me but cant stand when I’m away
I smell of corrosion but you think its divine
Years without a shower but you still give me your time
I come in different size and you like me large
I put food in your fridge and gas in your car
You can never forget me though you throw me around
But without me your worthless you will look like a clown

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  • Mr Ghaz on May 17, 2009

    Great post!..Thats really nice ones..I liked it..Well done and thanx for sharing this great poem.

  • papaleng on May 17, 2009

    quite a good write, but you need to check on your grammar and spellings.

  • Fresh Writing on Jun 23, 2009

    Excellent work, but I unfortunately must agree with papaleng- just a few errors corrected here and there and you\\\’d greatly improve its readability.

    -Fresh Writing

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