If Only I Could Describe Loss

Kip Spleen on Nov 13, 2009

Tags: could, describe, i, if, loss, only, poem, Poetry

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Toying with a different form.

if only i could describe loss

if only i could describe

if only i could

if only i

if only

if

if more

if more people

if more people would

if more people would create

if more people would create hope

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Comments (9)

AlmaG on Nov 13, 2009
It’s a fun poem but with depth.. wonderful! ^_^
Teves on Nov 13, 2009
Nice one…
LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 13, 2009
awesome!
wonder on Nov 13, 2009
Toying,but its a true feeling.
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 13, 2009
dats a different form of writing style..gud one…
Maxthevir on Nov 13, 2009
Nice poem Snowy!
Kip Spleen on Nov 13, 2009
Thanks Maxy!
livemike on Nov 13, 2009
That was very good and clever…I will try that myself sometime.
diamondpoet on Nov 13, 2009
It was different, I liked it.

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