If Only Just a Dream.

If only just a dream You walked in my life or did I walk into yours? Both of us seeing the past reborn the heart is now on the line. Too many days of sorrow, too many days of pain all I need is to have the hope of love for me… The days seem bleek, the clouds have emerged, the sunny days behind me, the warmness of your arms just out of reach. These words are bursting out of me like tears stinging from my eyes, no longer containable, not for only me to see anymore. The days become longer, the light as a binding noose, the nights pure hell, as eyes stay open in the darkness. To heal the pain one can never tell, to hear the words if only just a dream………….

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  • Aiswarya T Anish on Jul 10, 2010

    wow

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 10, 2010

    Nice.

  • papaleng on Jul 11, 2010

    beautifully written with good flow.

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Jul 11, 2010

    This is very well written. I think it would be even better if you broke up the lines. It is very poetic and needs that line formation.

  • Tina Cassello on Jul 11, 2010

    Dreams do come true and I believe that yours will one day.

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