What would happen if religion fails.

Life trails,

if religion fails,

and loneliness would make the world stand still,

picture this if you will,

the church was deserted,

filled with throbbing silence,

darkness between the choir stalls,

shadows on the walls,

as night falls,

the wind moving past the alter,

into the narrow ambulatory,

behind the apse

where the stillness paused

at the arched entrance,

waiting, waiting, waiting,

if religion fails.

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Comments (7)
  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 12, 2009

    yes u point out very true

  • Sammy2000 on Nov 12, 2009

    a good entry pa

  • Hansika on Nov 12, 2009

    very nice…i liked it

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Nov 12, 2009

    Religion is failing, it is mixed with mysticism,peculiar hatreds,and superstition;It must be replaced by systems of objective ethics based on fairness and Justice.

  • Teves on Nov 12, 2009

    Well writen…

  • ceegirl on Nov 12, 2009

    love the poet

  • Kristina Angel on Nov 12, 2009

    great well done :)

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