Comments on: If She Shows Herself?

By: cassandra evangelista

cassandra evangelista — Thu, 28 Jan 2010 18:33:29 +0000

Amazing. At first I thought you were talking about a woman you loved, but was surprised to discover your appreciation for planet earth

By: Franklin

Franklin — Thu, 24 Dec 2009 23:13:57 +0000

this is very lovely…

By: LOVELY HONEY

LOVELY HONEY — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 21:40:18 +0000

Your work enlightens me
To the very bone,
It’s chilly out here
Yet all she has shown,
The beauty that lies,
Beneath the whiteness
The snow has now covered.

Wait till tomorrow,
When the sun does rise
Gradually melts me
To sheer nakedness
Don’t then be surprised
I will still be the same,
As I once always was.

It’s only you
Who have changed?
Your stance,
‘Twas b’coz you thought,
I was really gone.

I return in your dreams
Every morn
Love forlorn
After all I’m
Always naturally reborn

By: cassandra antares

cassandra antares — Wed, 09 Dec 2009 03:27:32 +0000

great poem!! although I hate my mother, great job!!

By: LOVELY HONEY

LOVELY HONEY — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 20:15:25 +0000

I am glad for the twists you take
How happy I am
That I am not alone

The world has twins born
At any point of time
May not be to the same mother
That’s the cause of my research
To find that
My mind I have torn

By: Authoress Terry E. Lyle

Authoress Terry E. Lyle — Fri, 04 Dec 2009 07:31:31 +0000

That was a interesting spin on the earth, originally I was leaning towards rain….uhmmm I like it.

By: teresa brown

teresa brown — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 03:28:31 +0000

..stunning………..brilliant

By: Ruby Hawk

Ruby Hawk — Thu, 03 Dec 2009 01:05:19 +0000

Well done,

By: Blueage168

Blueage168 — Wed, 02 Dec 2009 22:12:26 +0000

beautiful poem about the different faces of the world. at first i thought the title alluded to the partner in the relationship opening up herself to the other partner.

By: Northernlight

Northernlight — Wed, 02 Dec 2009 20:43:56 +0000

The identity of ‘She’ kept me guessing. Nice comparisons with emotions.