If They Only Knew..

trios2009 on Dec 13, 2009

A poem about how I used to be.

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If they knew the truth about me, they would walk away

If they knew the things I have done, they wouldn’t want to stay

My past if full of evil deeds and selfish acts

Today I try and do good and to help others go the right way

I try to think about others instead of myself each and every day

My present is working out the kinks of my self

My future is unknown although I think it will be good

But I shouldn’t get over-confident, knock on wood

My future is yet to be written, but hopefully I will be a better person tomorrow

Maybe one day I can balance out my faults with kindness

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ladydryle on Dec 13, 2009
it’s never too late…whatever you deed before it’s accepted as long as you promise to change and never do the bad things again… I’ll be here to be your friend.. (^_^) can we?
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 13, 2009
pl remove drew diligences crap remarks

its not necessary to read and comment

negative remarks are not warranted .

we must make some contributory positive comments

if we have the ability to do so
fmakeita on Dec 16, 2009
Love this. All of us got our dark parts in the past. And it’s a great step to improve oneself. You could make it.
PhoenixRox on Dec 16, 2009
Forget about future. You are already an awesome person today
PhoenixRox on Dec 20, 2009
Came back
Christine Ramsay on Dec 22, 2009
A great piece. It is good that you have seen your mistakes and have learnt from them.

Christine

Hi there!