I was inspired to write this poem after reading a book that changed my whole perspective on how I view the world we live in. In fact, I read all of his books. The book is called Ishmael by Daniel Quinn.

If we could see forever,

What would we  observe?

The sunset alight with angled moon

onto the eclipsed night,

Standing high on the edge of

A collapsed ledge, yearning,

To be the gods, as we thought

 we once were.

 

If we could see forever,

What would we witness?

Awakened by the first bite,

The fruit of the gods,

Became the tree of human learning,

Coexisting with species

Of  this world and beyond.

 

If we could see forever,

What would we understand?

As civilization’s royalty, we became,

The gatekeepers of our own destruction.

 

Forbidding our land to adapt,

Forbidding jungle’s species to live free,

Inside their own space.

Foreshadowing the ocean’s garden,

Farmed to extinction.

 

Humanity unto man has finally won.

Populations bursting,

As towers of heat lace our icebergs,

Melting by second, in metric tons.

 

If we could see forever,

What would we foresee?

Oh, what have we become?

How, could we have dug so deeply

Into our own hallowed ground.

 

We are not gods, but specks of dust.

Resting in a shadowed microscopic space,

Riding upon evolution’s tides.

As we rise, we fall into the footprint,

We will leave behind.

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  • Sean Hardner on Apr 8, 2009

    Great poem. I loved your vivid words that enhance the overall picture of If We could see forever…fantastic command of the languge.
    Bravo!

  • Bullwinkle Muse on Apr 10, 2009

    Very nice work. I especially lke the last 2 lines.

  • Will Dee on Apr 10, 2009

    Your piece is right on point. Food for thought.

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