A poem about how time changes feelings and how some feelings remain the same.

If you could see me now,

You would see how much I’ve changed.

You would see how I’ve left my old self behind.

You would see how much I’ve lost and how much I’ve gained.

If you could see me now,

You would see how some feelings have changed,

And some have stayed the same.

If you could see me now,

You would see how I’ve become a better person.

You would see how I still care.

If you could see me now,

You would know I still love you.

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Comments (6)
  • diamondpoet on Nov 13, 2009

    I liked, nice flow and well written.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 13, 2009

    Great write….

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 13, 2009

    we all must change for the better

    that alone constitutes

    wisdom and love

    to its intense maximity

    new word s i coin

    as u will know what i mean
    faaaaaar better

  • Themax on Nov 13, 2009

    ahh..I liked it,Thanks for sharing :)

  • Teves on Nov 13, 2009

    Excellent…

  • Hansika on Nov 14, 2009

    nice one…

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