If You Took The Time to Look Closer

Darla Cooke on Mar 1, 2010

Tags: Eyes, feelings, night skies, Stars, truth

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A love poem.

If you took time to look closer,

you’d see the truth in my eyes.

Their depths reflect my feelings,

for I cannot tell you any lies.

My love for you shines bright,

like the stars in the night skies.

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Comments (16)

qasimdharamsy on Mar 1, 2010
Lovely….
moneynwealth on Mar 1, 2010
enjoy reading the poem, truthful.
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johnnydod on Mar 1, 2010
nice one
diamondpoet on Mar 1, 2010
Beautiful piece.
STEVE666 on Mar 1, 2010
Nice one, Darla!
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Mar 1, 2010
Darla, this is a beautiful poem as I applaud you for yet another job well done. Thank You for sharing both yourself and especially your craft of writing with us all. Wonderful poem Darla…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
ken bultman on Mar 1, 2010
Very nice, Darla.
Christine Ramsay on Mar 1, 2010
A lovely piece. Nice work, Darla.

Christine
Ruby Hawk on Mar 1, 2010
Lovely,
Goodselfme on Mar 1, 2010
Very nice.TX
chefpete41 on Mar 1, 2010
sounds like me i am a lousy lier. nice.
Brenda Nelson on Mar 2, 2010
when we care we dont need to lie
standingproud on Mar 2, 2010
Eyes say it all
albert1jemi on Mar 2, 2010
well written
Kate Smedley on Mar 3, 2010
A poem full of love, so romantic.
Hepsi.M on Mar 3, 2010
sweet and lovely love poem

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