If You Were Everything

Lilliana F on Mar 28, 2011

Tags: heart, hypothetical, love, poem, Poetry, the world

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Poem.

If everyone you knew was you

And everyone there was was you

So everyone you hurt was you

And everyone you love was you

And everyone you helped was you

And every demon slayed as you

If everything there was was you

Would you do things different

Or is it all the same to you?

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CHIPMUNK on Mar 28, 2011
Wow!! Lovely
Dreamy777 on Mar 28, 2011
great i like it
hammadkhan on Mar 28, 2011
good post
d1dezire on Mar 28, 2011
Wow so short, simple and full of insight.
“So everyone you hurt was you”. Yes we would do things differently.
Will Davis on Mar 29, 2011
Beautiful and inspired. Great peace of work.
tonyleather on Mar 29, 2011
Great poem and super example of lateral thinking Katie. Very well done.
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Kata de la Fraye on Mar 30, 2011
Very deep, well done!

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