Would you stay in any relationship that wasn’t meeting your needs or expectations?

Encouragement or cynicism

Support versus criticism

Lifted up or held down

Which ones would you choose

If you were me?

 

Taken for granted

Even worse, ignored

Condescended to

Neglected and abandoned

Or appreciated and cherished

My happiness and well-being forever

In the forefront of someone’s mind

Someone who makes my life whole

Rather than tearing it to pieces

Which position would you take

If you were me?

 

If someone offered you the world

Would you accept the gift?

Or would you stay safely inside

The four walls you’ve become

 So comfortable with?

Give it some thought

Then answer me honestly

What would you do

If you were me?

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  • Sonia Doreen on Jul 27, 2009

    This is a deep poem and very interesting to read, some wuestions are unanswerable, nice work!

  • ashan1614 on Jul 28, 2009

    Thanks for your feedback, Sonia! It’s true some questions are way too hard for one to answer; others we simply choose not to.

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 2, 2009

    Listen and God will answer you and I’m sure he will tell you the same as I will….. Fallow your own Heart…..

  • diamondpoet on Oct 6, 2009

    That was deep, I felt the emotion.

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