Poem…

A sad dream,

That’s my life without you.

You’ll see how beautiful

The days would be

If you return to me.

Nobody in the world

would love you like i do.

If you still remember

you can return tomorrow

Because I’ll always love you.

I love you,

I’ll always love you.

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Comments (9)
  • rutherfranc on Jul 6, 2009

    hope you can keep that promise…

  • Darla Cooke on Jul 6, 2009

    Very touching.

  • Joie Schmidt on Jul 6, 2009

    So sweet*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Amanda N Miller on Jul 6, 2009

    Beautiful.

  • Deep Blue on Jul 7, 2009

    Truly love is blind. But it could see through things.

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 7, 2009

    Touching heartfelt work about being so deeply in love with someone you would do anything for them to be at your side.Nice work.
    Tanya

  • livemike on Jul 9, 2009

    another emotional piece of work..I can feel the hurt inside..

  • kkwithluv on Mar 27, 2011

    i like it. short, yet touching(:

  • kkwithluv on Mar 27, 2011

    i like it. short, yet touching.

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