It doesn’t matter, he’ll never get the point…

Once I saw you there and I heard your cries, though there were no tears dripping from your eyes.

I knew that you were hurt though you’ll never tell, but I’ve experienced pain I know that’s what you felt.

I wish I could have held you; forever in my embrace, I wish you could have guessed, inside my heart you have a place.

When your soul begins to wonder if it has a home, I want you to remember that you’re not alone.

When you are in pain and drowning in despair, far across the distance you know I will be there.

I am sorry I am me I wish I’d give you more, I can give you what you need and send shivers to your core.

The hurt they’ve caused you in the past, I’ll take it all I’ll cure you fast.

I’ll take your heart and stitch your wounds, take your soul and revive it soon.

I’ll take the fear you store inside, and all the anguish that you deny.

The mistakes you did before darling, I don’t care, when you feel like you can’t take it anymore remember that I’m there.

There are no conditions in these desires, just love me back and you’ll acquire.

In your days of darkness when no one understands, I’ll be there to listen I’ll be your helping hand.

Remember I won’t judge you and that I will be there, this life with you my dear I wish that I could, spare.

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  • Tanya Wallace on Sep 10, 2009

    A poem with longing but it is truly a lovely, romantic poem!It is heartlfelt and sad.This poem has many mixed feelings and expressions but it works wonderfully because it is so well expressed!

  • Duff D Moss on Sep 11, 2009

    There is always such great deal of emotion conveyed in your writing. I do hope though, that your love life improves dude. Seems too much heartbreak and not enough joy eh?

  • Priyanka.dk on Sep 11, 2009

    Very emotional and sad write. Nicely written.

  • Jane Jane on Sep 11, 2009

    well done. love it.=)

  • Michael Eboh on Sep 12, 2009

    Oh wonderful. I appreciate!

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 14, 2009

    you have to have fun in life and sometimes you have to make changes to get it.

  • Casey Mack on Sep 20, 2009

    This is a lovely and lyrical read, and a poignant snapshot of a tale, well told.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 22, 2009

    beautiful you must be there

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