For anyone who’s ever realized, too late, that they’d chosen the wrong mate.

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The connection is broken

Did it ever exist?

Was it all an illusion

A vapor, a mist?

A mirage born of loneliness

A yearning within

A deep, gnawing longing

To find our soul’s twin

Were we simply enamored

With the idea of love?

The stuff the great romance

And dreams are made of

Did we blindly dive in

With great expectations,

Delusions of grandeur

And endless elation?

Never really quite knowing

That there would be trials

That our journey together

Would go on for miles

Wearing us down

Our patience grown thin

And what we hate now

We ignored going in

Not once did we stop

To consider the price

Of choosing a life mate

On a roll of the dice

With no common ground

For a foundation to build

Our house is now leaning

The laughter has stilled

We sit in the shadows

Of what might have been

If we’d chosen to part

Way back when

 

© 2009 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • Sourav on Nov 9, 2009

    Very free flowing. Wonderfully written!

  • Themax on Nov 9, 2009

    Great written,Thanks for sharing,Keep up the good work :)

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 9, 2009

    Very good writing. Very good flow. A familar tale for two many couples. Is it because we chose the wrong road to build the basics of our societal structure. Is it because our “melting pot”
    has too many varied values from out ancestors.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 9, 2009

    This happens such a lot. You have expressed your feelings so well. Good work.

    Christine

  • Emma Green on Nov 9, 2009

    Loved it.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 9, 2009

    You exressed this sorrowful situation well.

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 10, 2009

    Love the language in this one and the way that it flows.

  • Hansika on Nov 10, 2009

    nice one

  • diamondpoet on Nov 10, 2009

    Hey sista wthat was awesome. Great flow!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 10, 2009

    This happens a lot more often than people suspects it does.

  • K.Reshma on Nov 10, 2009

    Very lovely

  • live and lovin life on Nov 10, 2009

    beautifully written….

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Nov 10, 2009

    wow!!! I don’t know how else to descrie this poem, it’s beautiful! I haven’t read a poem like this in a long time. I love your wording and the intensity of your emotions.
    -god bless-

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Nov 10, 2009

    wow!!! I don\’t know how else to descrie this poem, it\’s beautiful! I haven\’t read a poem like this in a long time. I love your wording and the intensity of your emotions.
    -god bless-

  • mz.sunshine on Nov 11, 2009

    I really think you expressed your feelings alot. Sometimes I always questioned love.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 12, 2009

    A great piece of work…

  • deep blue on Nov 14, 2009

    Nice thoughts. Keep us looking for answers for life’s never ending questions. Thanks for sharing.

  • Aiyanna on Nov 15, 2009

    Very nice piece of work… A solemn truth made very interesting but makes you think of your decisions taken, both good or bad…

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Nov 18, 2009

    You know I love rhyming poetry, and this is the pinnacle. Unquestionably thoughtful and genuine with easy and clever rhyme and a flow that leads you through effortlessly.

    Thank you…x

  • T. S. GARP on Nov 19, 2009

    Great write! Wonderful emotional words about relationships. Well written and flows nicely!

  • dabutlerdidit on Nov 19, 2009

    Yes I have been there too with sadness and regret but now I know that the missed connections prepared me for the present, allowed me to check those unwanted things off my list and reach toward my goal of relational bliss. Very well written, I enjoyed every word

  • Olive B. on Dec 13, 2009

    Excellent…neatly expressed, nice rhyming ;)

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