A Senryu verse.

illusions of you

beckons me all through the passage

towards your grave.

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  • Kevin Petersen on Mar 23, 2010

    good

  • drelayaraja on Mar 23, 2010

    Another nice one………..

  • Sourav on Mar 23, 2010

    Wonderful!

  • Precious Illusions on Mar 23, 2010

    beautiful

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Mar 23, 2010

    that was really so beautifully composed, full of depth and very meaningful. i loved every word of it. thanks for creating and sharing this wonderful senryu, priyanka.

  • wonder on Mar 26, 2010

    Beautifully composed.

  • standingproud on Mar 31, 2010

    I found this interesting :)

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