Nice song written by me.

thousand illusions decorate my room
thousand crows perched on the streets shouting
iron chains bind my thoughts
and I melt into the depths of nothing …

fighting to live, surrender and die …
buried in the sand, looking for an oasis
with the obstacle of being tied …
the luck of the ravens pint bad reputations …

thrust overcomes me … end
hurts me, kill me …
brings me, brings me …
Like your words …

my being loses the fight,
and falls deep in the shadows of a forest …
surrounded by life … empirical actions
adorn the fountain …

the moon shines in the water …
I reach the end of the road …
following a new trail …
watching you all the time …

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Comments (5)
  • Billyfnstacy on Nov 22, 2009

    I like this. Very nicely written.

  • ramonero17 on Nov 22, 2009

    :)

  • NANCY on Dec 6, 2009

    THE NECESSITY TO SHARE A POETRY IS EXCITING.
    OF A BEING WHO FEELS ANOTHER BEING WHO EXISTS. COMPANION POET NOT THESE ONLY.
    YOUR POETRY HAS FOUND AN ANSWER.
    SIMPLE, DEEP AND BRAVE IT IS YOUR POETRY.
    YOU DO NOT STOP WRITING.

  • ramonero17 on Dec 6, 2009

    thank you nancy!!

  • Atanacio on Mar 17, 2010

    very well written

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