Poem that tries on solitude feelings.

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I’m a ghost lost in the earth,

I’m looking for peace for my soul,

I’m looking for the death of my pain

but nothing happen, nothing change,

and I’m still lost, looking for some of hope.

I’m a ghost and my essence almost vanishes,

I’m a ghost lost in the earth,

the heaven is denied for my,

I am condemned to exist by always

in this vaporous form of pain,

until god stop the time

and free, forever, all ours soul.

I’m and ghost, I’m a ghost

and the eternity void is my life.

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  • Elijah99 on Dec 14, 2009

    I can tell that this commits almost to depression. I like it in the way of showing a darker side of life. I give it a 9.

  • PPDDFF on Dec 16, 2009

    Good poem AquileS!

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