One thing is for sure…

Am not a good writer
not even good in spelling and grammar,
but I do creative stuff like poetry,
graphic design, story telling and blogging.

Am not even good in meeting people
but once you know me and have me as a friend,
I will treat you as a treasure that even mosquitoes
could not hurt you if am around.

Am not good in answering message either,
‘coz am afraid that others might angry with me
for why I answer the 10 of you then ignore the rest.

I do have a lot of messages every day,
some of it are for nothing
and the other are for real.

For those of you who write with passion, concerns
and originally poetic got my reply.
But for those who don’t, have no answer from me…
well, I guess you have no point to be answered at all.
‘Coz some people who sends me note
are just making me laugh, angry and sometimes, cry.

I deserve happiness, i think all of us do.

Am not really good in answering your letter
but am sure I am a good kisser.

(Oppss… Just Kidding!)

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  • M A Bhanpurwala on Jan 21, 2009

    sure ! you are a good kisser

  • jimy on Jan 21, 2009

    So where is mine?

  • Alicia Wind on Jan 21, 2009

    Go girl! lolzz

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jan 21, 2009

    me tiCKled!

  • Majic on Jan 21, 2009

    Gyahahaha!!! You’re just a few miles away so catch my flying kisses before you sleep! heheh!

  • Adam Henry Sears on Jan 21, 2009

    Hi, Julie Ann, how are you?
    This is a pretty interesting little piece, and I agree: we do have to be somewhat selective in choosing friends. After all, who wants friends that have nothing good to say, or that you know have hidden motives? “‘Not I,’ said the dog.” :) Thanks for sharing.

  • Adam Henry Sears on Jan 21, 2009

    The little quote: “‘Not I,’ said the dog.” is from a children’s story I heard when I was a kid.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 21, 2009

    A very open and honest piece. I like it and can associate with it.

    Christine

  • nutuba on Jan 21, 2009

    Very insightful, nicely done. I enjoy reading your work!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 21, 2009

    you get kisses,
    i get misses.
    you love a kiss ,
    i so very much miss.

    but if you like poetry ,
    i can write ,
    just go through your script,
    again and do delight,
    correct your grammar through the lap top ,
    u have

    i thus make a poem ,
    every moment all i do,
    spell a few words , write a few sentences ,
    then press spell and grammar check ,

    thats all there comes out,
    my flawless poetry.

    will you please follow me

    and if you so wish do have me miss,

    a friend only in you indeed.

    thank you if i have hurt you ,

    i am sorry,

    its once again an added miss

    for me…………..

  • Angie0000023 on Jan 21, 2009

    haha that was a good poem!!! I liked it… very different from a lot ive seen. I thik that is why I like it so much!!! FANTASTIC!!!

  • Kim Buck on Jan 21, 2009

    There is much money to be made in kissing…good luck!

  • Westbrook on Jan 21, 2009

    Kissing? hummmm. Sounds fun. I agree with your opinion.

  • Sakuragi on Jan 21, 2009

    Nice!

  • Bo Russo on Jan 21, 2009

    That was nice,I\\\’d like to blow you a kiss,I was visiting your profile yesterday,but I\\\’m halfway around the world from you,it may take a little while to get there.

  • Unofre Pili on Jan 21, 2009

    That’s ok.

  • OhSugar on Jan 21, 2009

    One of my earlier pieces,is about been a good kisser. I happy that you are one of them. I like this piece. You go girl!!

  • papaleng on Jan 21, 2009

    what a cute and heart-warming piece, do you have a friendster account/ LOL

  • AC Hamilton III on Jan 21, 2009

    Way to go princess! Great job. Throw it out there girl! I am glad you’re my friend.

    AC

  • Eunice Tan on Jan 21, 2009

    Wow!
    Very interesting piece

  • Maria Blazz on Jan 21, 2009

    That’s a good hability to have. You may write a “how to” article to teach us your technique, haha.

  • Patrick Bernauw on Jan 22, 2009

    You’re good in titles too… and this really is some lovely imagery: “I will treat you as a treasure that even mosquitoes
    could not hurt you if am around…”

  • Michael Eboh on Jan 22, 2009

    I love it and need more of this. Thanks Princess.

  • Dee Gold on Jan 22, 2009

    go kababayan!

  • thestickman on Jan 25, 2009

    Nicely done. :-)

  • Juhls on Jan 25, 2009

    how precious.

    Jules @ Lovely Las Vegas
    http://www.lovelylasvegas.blogspot.com

  • Wylrhyss Terrado RN on Jan 26, 2009

    I great right indeed… Hi ate, I have viewed your friendster, if you are in the mood, feel free to add me…

  • Likha on Jan 26, 2009

    Wow! I wonder how your next poem will end? You got the Triond world going mad about that kiss! Iba ka kabayan!

  • Steve West on Jan 27, 2009

    No doubt that you are a good kisser and a whole lot more. Nice poem.

  • K Kristie on Jan 27, 2009

    You go girl! Enjoyed this one.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 28, 2009

    That’s so cute.

  • SugarPlumRein on Jan 30, 2009

    ayun oh! hehehe where in taguig are u friend? I frequently visit taguig.. lol.. anyway.. That was a good free verse poem.. wow! and another WOW!

  • Johnny Yuma on Feb 2, 2009

    Good post; will be back.
    Johnny Yuma

  • techsavvy999 on Feb 28, 2009

    Lovely article…

  • fragile18 on Dec 28, 2009

    nice one. so cute. :)

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