I’m Lost Without You

Liane Schmidt on Jul 3, 2009

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Vulnerable and true.

I’m lost
Without you

A hollow rush, pleading
Vulnerable and true

Grasping for your touch
Comforted only, by solitude
A faithful friend
A hand I must
Embrace, once again

I’m quieted, sorrow-filled
Thrown against a sea
Of painted clouds
Of images reflecting
Two forms once entwined perfectly

I close my eyes to you
My legs throb in agony
As I run away madly
From everything I once knew

To forget, to feel
To scream, to steal
The smallest glimpse
Of two

I’m lost
Without you

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JerryKBradford on Jul 3, 2009
This is beautiful Liane. Truly.

Jerry
rajeev bhargava on Jul 3, 2009
beautiful poetry and beautiful video. i really like it alot.
goodselfme on Jul 3, 2009
A deep and lovely penned piece of yearning.
STEVE666 on Jul 3, 2009
Beautifully put, Liane. Loved it!
stryka66 on Jul 3, 2009
Excellent work, Liane – & I love Lifehouse – great combination
Alina Beck on Jul 3, 2009
Absolutely mouth-wateringly lovely!
clay hurtubise on Jul 3, 2009
Very nice, I love how it flows.
Thanks,
Clay
Daniel B on Jul 3, 2009
Truly beautiful.
Mr Ghaz on Jul 3, 2009
Well done!!..truly amazing and wonderful work..beautiful and lovely poem..I really liked it..Thanx for sharing.
Poetic Enigma on Jul 3, 2009
Absolutely beautiful and heart touching piece,
Thanks for sharing
beautiful song too, btw!
California Dreamer on Jul 3, 2009
Wow, you did a terrific job with writing a beautiful poem and combing a nice video with it, great job
OhSugar on Jul 3, 2009
I gave you a click for this beautifully written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
Katie Marie on Jul 3, 2009
Absolutely beautiful Liane. Can’t pick out a favorite part, it’s all so good.
Anders Hegelund on Jul 3, 2009
Hello Liane. I wanted to see what you’re doing and what a surprice. I really like your poems
Ruby Hawk on Jul 3, 2009
Amazingly well done,
Anastasia Meredith Oh on Jul 4, 2009
Wow!| That is so beautiful! you write so well!
Sheila M on Jul 4, 2009
Very beautiful poetry=)
Daisy Peasblossom on Jul 4, 2009
I don’t usually like music inspired poetry; too often, it is simply an echo of the published lyrics. In this case, you need to listen to the music video as well as read the poem. Understanding who is being missed,and why, this poems is poignant and intense. For anyone who has felt grief the line “as I run away madly” expresses the need to escape the inescapable. I have “liked” and Stumbled this one.
Cynthia J on Jul 4, 2009
What a wonderfully penned piece of poetry.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
NA Staffieri on Jul 4, 2009
very heartfelt! Thanks, Liane.
Nicholas Kenney on Jul 4, 2009
Tragic, moving, honest and soulful Liane. You write such intense poetry. I hope this is not what you are experiencing right now…
CHAN LEE PENG on Jul 4, 2009
Very touching piece, thanks! Liked it.
rizzei on Jul 5, 2009
the video is restricted in our country, it says..:) anyway, i really love lifehouse as much as i loved reading this post of yours:) well done!
krishnarain on Jul 5, 2009
Lovely poem with a great video…my best wishes to u.
Marcus Edward John Cross on Jul 5, 2009
Nice poem. I’ve thumbed it up on SU
Deep Blue on Jul 6, 2009
Deeply astounding, thanks my friend.
jamesII on Jul 9, 2009
Find your way-my love!Partnership is like a forest–keep a compass and a gun–never know which will be needed first! Hope you find he that runs your inner legs to rubber–kind of burn rubber on them–so that all the fun, pleasure, zoo-ball good times will follow you for the rest of your life! See! I write you into your own good fairy tale–bye! Bye! Tinkerbelle!
Loretta on Jul 18, 2009
Very heartfelt and nice read
SunshineRay on Aug 13, 2009
That was beautiful!

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