I’m No Body

Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 2, 2011

Tags: barren, confess, Cry, die, exist, heart, I'm no body, laugh, live, loyalty, regret, revenge, tear, Trash

When nothing goes right go left and I did but that made me nobody.

I was dreaming,I was seeking missing part of my heart

and world made of truth and loyalty.

I used to peep from doors as waiting for hilarity and optimism.

I used to wake up at mid nights as to search

which thing can fill depletedness in me.

I creeped hither and thither in darkness

for catching my lost sigh of relief.

Land of my heart is barren and athirst,

I want to be drenched in faith and love,

but for that I need body of real emotions along with authenticity

and I even ain’t got Shadow of that.

Ah!how adverse I am that my body is breached into sundry parts

My heart says,”Forgive everyone for everything and abandon what people did.

My brain insists,”Confess but don’t regret.Just take revenges”

and I am neutral just spectator, inspect the battle between both.

Now,I brought myself into light,I think that’s true,”Deeds make the man.”

All I did was neither wrong nor right then why I’m

finding myself in this celestial world where I never belonged.

I don’t want to dismiss my past and not to recall it too.

I don’t want to cry and will never think to laugh.

I don’t desire to win and not to surrender too.

I don’t want to break relations and not to keep them alive as well.

Neither I want to die nor I want to live.

I’m not even stranger in this strange land,

not even trash in this slum area,

not even a single tear in someone’s eye,

not even curse to terminate someone.

I’m just no body:(

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CHIPMUNK on Nov 2, 2011
Awesome read thanks for sharing
binyumanyun on Nov 2, 2011
Awesome pict..
naruto100 on Nov 2, 2011
Good One !!!
DanielD on Nov 2, 2011
Amazing as always…
lovinglyoursjuny on Nov 2, 2011
Great and fantastic photos
JMorgan071 on Nov 2, 2011
Very nice
marqjonz on Nov 2, 2011
I like these lines:

I’m not even stranger in this strange land,

not even trash in this slum area,

not even a single tear in someone’s eye,

not even curse to terminate someone.
thelyricwriter on Nov 2, 2011
Another great poem. I hope you don’t feel this way though.
Nibf707 on Nov 2, 2011
Very good! But why so depressing?
Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 2, 2011
@NiB7707 because I’m nobody.
nurzaira on Nov 2, 2011
ummm.. beautiful pict
Mohamed Abdel Fattah Hussein on Nov 2, 2011
fantastic photos
PebblePath on Nov 2, 2011
sad but nice …
erwinkennythomas on Nov 2, 2011
touching and evocative of sadness!
misterdd on Nov 2, 2011
You are somebody. You are you, and you must believe in yourself. You know why? Because i know that feeling. Maybe not all that, but i know feeling. And believe me you are somebody. You just must live for yourself and be happy for yourself, then for others
dwisuka on Nov 2, 2011
sad, but good. I like it
stevenex on Nov 2, 2011
Sad but very poetic
J L Carey Jr on Nov 2, 2011
Great job on this poem. I really liked, ” catching my lost sigh “. You do a beautiful job of immersing us in the macabre.
VoIP on Nov 3, 2011
I like the last picture the best. xx
Shaunak Vats on Nov 3, 2011
superlike
KeddRS on Nov 3, 2011
Very touching.
Afrohead1408 on Nov 3, 2011
Cool pictures. Nice share
tonyleather on Nov 3, 2011
Oddly moving
ilhamsk on Nov 3, 2011
another good work
Ruby Hawk on Nov 3, 2011
A beautiful job, well done.
thetoplad on Nov 3, 2011
great, well done
tonywriter on Nov 3, 2011
I love your poetry little friend , good work
Eliza26 on Nov 3, 2011
Love the words and pics.
CutezSoNia on Nov 3, 2011
very good.. i like it
beingwell on Nov 3, 2011
Great job!
mdrkarim7 on Nov 4, 2011
I’m nobody means, I’m somebody inside!
mdrkarim7 on Nov 4, 2011
I\’m nobody means, I\’m somebody inside!
mdrkarim7 on Nov 4, 2011
Great piece of art.
rajaryanme on Nov 4, 2011
A good share.
WolfEmDown on Nov 4, 2011
nice poem
ittech on Nov 4, 2011
means the everybody
straw1979 on Nov 4, 2011
very great poem like always
mtrguanlao on Nov 4, 2011
I don’t think you are nobody! With this poem that you’ve made,you are a poet now!
vijayanths on Nov 4, 2011
You are a great poet.
FX777222999 on Nov 4, 2011
Great of course to be somebody with heart and mind.
rgreenfield on Nov 4, 2011
very intense. you are indeed someone who shares your emotions well.
ittech on Nov 4, 2011
thanks nice poem
Aldy Varius on Nov 4, 2011
Nice poems and i like the pictures. it’s really great…
bolive on Nov 5, 2011
great post!
Muzammil196 on Nov 5, 2011
Nice one…with appealing photos.
multiplenews on Nov 5, 2011
Fantastic poem.
girishpuri on Nov 5, 2011
very deep , from the core of your heart , just enjoying your rhythm.
ImKarn23 on Nov 5, 2011
we are all nobody. we are all somebody too.
beautiful!
hari1111 on Nov 6, 2011
Do beautiful yet depressing at the same time!
ProBono on Nov 6, 2011
nice share..
FX777222999 on Nov 7, 2011
Revisiting this article.
socialbookstatus on Nov 7, 2011
Nice piece.
Franwrihot82 on Nov 7, 2011
They say a writer writes because thats the only way they can show what they feel inside. I hope you dont feel you are nobody everybody is somebody. I feel this poem is good but sad. But sometime pain helps us creat the most beautiful artwork I feel it has done so for you. good job.
juliachild on Nov 8, 2011
Great share
thetoplad on Nov 8, 2011
great
beingwell on Nov 8, 2011
An emotional piece.
ayeshar on Nov 11, 2011
aww.. a very sad poem
holdkunal on Nov 12, 2011
saddy stuff..
Jonas N on Nov 15, 2011
good job
Andrew Handley on Nov 15, 2011
great poem
thetoplad on Nov 15, 2011
fantastic
pattiann on Nov 18, 2011
The perfect poem!
AmosTheCat on Nov 18, 2011
Nobody just wrote a great un-poem..
daytona500 on Nov 22, 2011
A great poem, genuinely liked it.xD..
sjindal1121 on Nov 22, 2011
Well Written…
rizkiandreas on Nov 23, 2011
very interesting article, I really liked it,,
kelbix on Nov 25, 2011
it is touching, thanks for sharing
rizkiandreas on Nov 25, 2011
I feel very touched
kelbix on Nov 30, 2011
That is a well written poem
PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 1, 2011
I couldn’t imagine feeling so empty
Vinaya says good bye on Dec 4, 2011
Good god! Your words are so powerful.
nurzaira on Dec 5, 2011
again here like it
stonecutter on Dec 12, 2011
” you are a child of the universe, no less than the trees and the stars”. nice poem, but don’t feel too sad.
Safa on Feb 6, 2012
moving and depressing…impressive
ebasearticles on Feb 15, 2012
nice poem Like Me
dodolbete on Mar 18, 2012
You’re definitely somebody… You’re a great writer and artist ^_^
VV on Mar 29, 2012
and again I like it

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