An old poem I wrote about back in 2008, please note that I wrote this poem way back, and its currently trending all over the web many girls like it, so they claim to be the orginal writer…and it makes me upset since I am, I have come across many girls on various sites getting credit for this poem and changing very little detail in it like the title, back then I went by the username craziiangel91 currently though, I go by nesmonster91 or nes…anyone else is not the the orginal writer or me, so please fans tell the stealers off thanks! :)

  I’m that girl that holds a smile on her face,

 even when things are a mess and her faith falls out of place,

  I’m that girl who believes in taking chances for what I want,

   instead of pretending to be happy as someone I’m not.

 

  I’m that girl who’s not afraid to let her emotions show,

  and learns to let go as her feelings start to grow,

  I’m that girl who would never give up on the love of her life,

 because there are two paths she can make the wrong or the right,

  I’m that girl who would travel a million miles away,

  just to find the love shes been waiting for everyday

I’m that girl who’s constantly criticized for who I am,

   well these mistakes are permanently writtten in pen,

    I can’t erase the hatred not now,

    but my inner voice whispers I’ll make it through somehow.

I’m that girl who doesen’t care what other people think of my style,

     the one who savors every moment even if it’s for a little while,

     I’m that girl that can never keep a secret,

     I’m shy but that dosen’t mean I can ever keep it,

     I’m that girl that kisses but dosen’t believe,

     because she’s sad that if she lets go and then her love would leave.

  I’m that girl that people call weird, random, and dramatic,

     but theres more to me if you’ll  listen behind all the noise and static,

     I’m that girl that can cry and laugh all at the same time,

     the one thats innocent looking but can committ a heartbroken crime,

     I’m that girl that tries hard to push herself through,

     the one that doesen’t care if she’ll ever fit in to be cool.

 

I’m that girl that people call imperfect,

     my hairs always a mess,

    I’m under a lot of pressure and all it’s stress,

    I’m really not as different as all the rest,

    If it were up to me I’ll admit I come in second best,

    I’m that girl who loves to laugh,

    the one who can joke around till things get out of control,

    the one who envy’s those blonde girls and their perfect lives,

    meanwhile I’m stuck on this wild ride.

 

I’m that girl who loves to dream,

   but this reality is not what it seems,

  a fairytale ending waiting to come true,

  another risk worth taking what does she have to loose?

  I’m that girl who can never prove what she can really do,

  because she gives up to easily but none really knew,

  instead she’s judged by others that are strangers to her eyes,

 bottled up with any goodbyes and silent cries for help,

 but nones there so she has to rely on herself…

a smile painted on her face so mistreated so misunderstood,

all she has is herself to make her innerself good.

I’m that girl,

 

 and that is my world…

 

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  • 1hopefulman on Feb 14, 2012

    Great! You have every right to be that girl.

  • Nes on Feb 14, 2012

    haha thank you very much!

  • Vinaya says good bye on Feb 15, 2012

    You seem a good girl.

  • J Patrick Perry on Mar 29, 2012

    Very heartfelt. After reading this poem, it feels like you’ve put much thought into it, which, in my opinion makes it one of your best works.

    Well done.

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