Excuse the language. Criticism accepted and greatly appreciated.
I don’t feel right,
like I don’t wanna get through the night.
It’s alright,
I’ll be better sometime.
I’m not gunna cry,
tears blur my sight.
I gotta see the sunlight,
so I’ll fight.
With all my might,
all my try.
Hand me my pipe,
hand me a light.
Emotions crazy from black to white,
I’m dyin’.
Gotta get up,
gotta change my luck.
I feel so stuck,
like I’m in a rut.
I’m like a squirrel without a nut,
but so what?
Something to aim for that’s what,
it ain’t that far from this town of smut.
I don’t give a f*ck,
you can take it up the butt.
You can stab, you can cut,
it ain’t gon’ mean much.
I can’t be touched,
unless it’s what I want.
I get what I want when I want it,
like a baby that wants his mom’s tit.
I don’t cry for shit,
I jus get it.
Ain’t no skeptics or critics,
jus tricks that get it,
or get hit.
I won’t throw a fit,
I’ll jus throw a fist.
I’m pissed,
your lit.
Ya swing & miss,
I laugh as you grit.
I hiss,
you stumble & fall into a black pit,
an abyss.
You quit,
then I spit.
Then you split,
I win.
Like always, again.
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