A reflection about life as we know it.

Imagine…

For one moment

If perfection reigned supreme

The evidence of reality

Transformed into the dream

*

Health and well-being

The only way of life

Happiness everywhere

No hint of war or strife

Perpetual fun and laughter

Love and kindness in every breath

Would you really value life more?

Could you possibly value life – less?

If there were no way of knowing

What it is to cry with tears of pain

And to feel the joy thereafter

When healing manifests again

*

A utopian existence

Perfect peace and contentment for all

Would life be as rich, in essence

Or become meaningless and poor

It’s impossible to know, heat

Without experiencing, cold

The mysterious challenges of life remain

Testing how it will all unfold

*

Would a flower look so beautiful

Its fragrance smell as sweet

If it didn’t labour through a chill

And survive a wondrous feat

*

Would a friend mean as much to you

If they’ve never held your hand

When you’ve needed a shoulder to cry on

And someone to understand

*

The scheme of life, so complex

Yet the message simple and true

The extremes of life, good and bad

Make life meaningful – for you!

.

© Copyright J M Lennox. All Rights Reserved.

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  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on May 17, 2011

    I believe we were meant to live forever and this fact is hard to fathom with our limited even fractional use of our minds immense capacity.

    I believe that good can and will exist without the presence of evil
    I believe that we can appreciate life without the notion of eventual death

    Love without hate
    Life without death
    Good without bad

  • Raj the Tora on May 17, 2011

    Very touchy poem. Thanks.

  • Starpisces on May 17, 2011

    very beautiful poem.

  • Brewed Coffee on May 17, 2011

    I love this poem Janette. Specially this part:

    “Would a flower look so beautiful
    Its fragrance smell as sweet
    If it didn’t labour through a chill
    And survive a wondrous feat”

    True, we get to appreciate things more if we know that they are not always there for the taking.

  • webseowriters on May 17, 2011

    thanks for such a lovely poem

  • Val Mills on May 17, 2011

    I really like this Janette. I agree, we can’t appreciate the good things without having the less than perfect to compare them with. This is a beautifully written poem.

  • Peace Poet on May 17, 2011

    This is an original cotribution to the world of poetry. Thanks.

  • Ima Vee on May 17, 2011

    It’s impossible to know, heat
    Without experiencing, cold

    I love this line Janet… very true…Such a wonderful piece of poetry…

  • Adrn0919 on May 17, 2011

    How beautiful and well expressed. I just love this poem. Good Job!

  • LCM Linda on May 17, 2011

    A beautifully written and thoughtful poem. Enjoy reading it very much.

  • Sharif Ishnin on May 18, 2011

    Everything is a blessing in disguise. Wonderful entry.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on May 18, 2011

    Very touching and beautifully written.

  • Sushant94 on May 18, 2011

    woo lovely

  • papaleng on May 18, 2011

    The scheme of life, so complex

    Yet the message simple and true

    The extremes of life, good and bad

    Make life meaningful – for you!

    This is what life is all about. Excellent piece, JM

  • el zorro on May 18, 2011

    Imagine for one moment…love it very much..indeed if only man would just take for a moment to realize what life is all about and how beautiful lit is,
    a touching poem as well as one that makes one think. :)

  • Phoenix Montoya on May 18, 2011

    Yet sometimes, the said ‘extreme’ is unbearable. I only imagine such peaceful things in heaven. Simply wonderful Janette.

  • Christine Ramsay on May 19, 2011

    Wow, Janette! This is such beautifully written poem. As you say we have to experience both extremes to really appreciate the difference. It is definitely your best one so far. Well done.

  • J M Lennox on May 19, 2011

    Thank you everyone for your very kind comments. They are very much appreciated.

  • mtrguanlao on May 20, 2011

    It’s impossible to know, heat
    Without experiencing, cold…love this line so much! In life,there’s always a balance,we can never know the true meaning of it without experiencing the poitives and negatives. :)

  • Peace Poet on May 20, 2011

    The poet’s reflection about utopian world is very admirable. the style of the poem is clear and polished.

  • vocalcoach on May 20, 2011

    I love this poem – I agree with all that you say. Thank you and blessings to you. A new fan and follower~vocalcoach

  • Likha on May 21, 2011

    Wow, this is packed with so much wisdom.

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