Imbalance of Power

Budy236 on Dec 3, 2011

Tags: bully, helpless, insecure, sad, weak

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My first Cinquain that I’ve published about bullying. Please give feedback.

Bully

Sad, Insecure

Hitting, Teasing, Gossiping

Pathetic

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Comments (6)

barney rubble on Dec 3, 2011
Bullys are empty lost insecure cowards who prey on the unfortunate to big up their smallness .
Budy236 on Dec 4, 2011
So true…
Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 4, 2011
right.don’t b timid like me
Angelji on Dec 4, 2011
Bullying is a work of cowards…too bad ,hope they won’t do this to women..
Sharon L. West on Dec 4, 2011
yes
Kristie Claar on Dec 19, 2011
Agreed! Great job! God Bless!

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