This is a poem I quickly wrote about suicide. Someone on another site commented on one of my suicide poems- "that is horrible"…which I thought it was supposed to be lol…which lead my to thinking could I write one which was nice in a way..with a push from someone I decided to give it a try…so here goes.

The blade as swift and delicate
as a hummingbird in flight
rapidly spinning like the tiny wings of hope
imitating the gentle humming of my heart
what precious execution i have control over
lying on a bed of crimson petals
closing in on the darkness
tranquility coursing through my veins
the great beyond calling out my name
outlining my time with a crisp decent
a fresh start blooming over a different horizon
my skin begins to leak and blend
an effortless shattering of my soul
soon to be running free
gracing my bare feet
in everlasting fields of golden wonder
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