My glorious Hwang…

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My immortal beloved
I need to have you once again
Writhing within your embrace
Bound forever by your grace

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Take me softly in your arms
Gently lay me down once again
Your velvet sword quivering
My lonely soul shivering

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Hold me steady and true, love
Bring me to ruin once again
Harmony of soul and flesh
Quenching of two hearts refreshed

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Take me softly, my beloved
Hold me immortal once again

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  • raman13 on Aug 23, 2009

    Good Stuff

    Interesting

    best regards

  • ken bultman on Aug 23, 2009

    Sensuous, powerful.

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 23, 2009

    Great free flowing emothins just flying off this page. like it!

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 23, 2009

    A very romantic and passionate poem.

    Christine

  • Lostash on Aug 23, 2009

    You should write a book! Women would love it!!!

  • Shirley Shuler on Aug 23, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, you write what dreams are made of, beautiful as always!!

  • Melody SJAL on Aug 23, 2009

    So sweet and passionate.

  • ckulinski36 on Aug 24, 2009

    Very good vivid detail

  • kathie107 on Aug 24, 2009

    Excellent, well done.

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