A tomb within the walls.

Image by Conanil

Screams of terror,

echoing through the walls.

Heavy chains clang,

and she endlessly sobs.

`

She shouts and weeps.

The castle remains deaf.

As night engulfs,

she mourns in great anguish.

`

More and more groans.

Grand voice becomes hoarse.

She stifles a cackle,

as dying hopes prevail.

`

Horrible fate,

merciless verdict.

Death within walls.

Her real nightmare gnaws.

`

Soon, mere scrapings,

no hints of cries within.

Handsome maiden,

into a rotting flesh.

`

A living corpse,

between the lonesome walls.

In dark solace,

forever, she will dwell.

`

Inspired by Edgar Allan Poe – great, great master of mystery and macabre.

(c) Phoenix Montoya @ October 29, 2010

Other dark poems by this author:

Pendulum

My Elisha

Mesmerized

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Comments (10)
  • Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 29, 2010

    Hmmmmmh, something pretty different.

  • Starpisces on Oct 29, 2010

    a poem with powerful words and well expressed.
    :)

  • awesome11 on Oct 29, 2010

    great share! thanks!

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 29, 2010

    Thanks for this wonderful poem, but a bit sadden tone.

  • BC Doan on Oct 29, 2010

    Scary poem for Halloween, Phoenix! You have a gift of sending frightful thought through your verses..

  • Kaye TM on Oct 29, 2010

    i love the depth of words in this poem.amazing. =p

  • yes me on Oct 30, 2010

    And a happy Halloween to you too’oooo cheers

  • Dee Gold on Oct 30, 2010

    A piece for Halloween.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 3, 2010

    A good one.

  • AngelaFaith on Jul 31, 2011

    This would make for a great book. Very good!

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