There was no way out.

Impasse
There was no way out

Bluntness of mind increasingly become endless.
Try removing the chirping of birds or dew this morning.
But it continues the more mature bluntness does not budge.
All the way out do not want to be friends.

Where are all busy people do not want to understand.
I’m getting giddy unable to reach any grip.
Where people go passed not say hello.
This bluntness remained there’s no way to exit.

Do not understand even less understood.
Should any problem can be overcome.
But why not also change.
Bluntness of mind does not see his way.

If I’d like to make friends,
If I had a lot to share,
Wish I could care,
This bluntness probably will not happen.

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Comments (4)
  • SowmyaT on Jan 13, 2011

    Nice poem

  • learnandearn on Jan 13, 2011

    lovely poem

  • samgoldencoffee on Jan 13, 2011

    interesting poem you wrote there. full of expression.
    well written.

  • Mike Davis on Jan 13, 2011

    Enjoyed – good work

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