How very true. We try our best to be perfect and expect it from those around as well.

Thanks for sharing this article.

Beautifully put.

Truer words were never spoken.

Beautiful and creative lines.Nice.

A beautiful message. I loved it.

Very well written Josey. Truly loved this one.

very nice piece of poetry Josey,thanks

I enjoyed this, so true.

…Hi Josey, Such a very deep meaning,
well written piece. You are very skilled.
Take care. Your comments on my behalf
are greatly appreciated.

Beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading this!

Loved this well written piece. You are right no-one is perfect, the poem however seemed to be =)

Josey,
Great Job!!! I loved this! You have such a way of putting things into perspective. But do keep in mind, that its true, though none of us is perfect, its also true god didn\’t make no junk. He who thinks and says he is perfect is only a fool that is lieing to himself.There has been only one being that is perfect in every way, and that is gods son Jesus. Wed all make mistakes, and in doing so, we learn from our mistakes. Again, Excellent poem, Josey. Keep up the good work. You are fantastic!!!!!!

Randy

Wonderful poem, Josey!

You guys are too nice. Thanks!

Very nice Josey!

That was a well written piece, I loved the words and meaning.

lovely poem, great wisdom.

great poem, well done.

Beautiful and captivating!

Great work,

It flows very smoothly and yet still has a deep meaning behind it.

Keep it up,

Koyin

beautiful and inspirational poem!

very nice. i like it.

I love your rhythm and the gentle tone. The theme that we all have our “dysfunctions” is so true also, though that might not be too strong a word. Great poem!

As i read this i smiled thinking how many people i know including myself should read this as a reminder before we start our day. very nice read

Great job. Your poem was beautiful. It is truly inspirational.

Beautiful.

Very informative my friend you should be proud.

Great work. You have skill with a poem.

very nice!

Enjoy reading this:

http://english.agonia.net/index.php/poetry/1786912/index.html
Looking in the mirror,,,
poetry [ ]
life,old age, memories,change,time and space,

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by mazHur [ Mazhar Butt]

Looking in the mirror

by mazHur

It made me laugh
at myself;
That was a deadly mistake
Looking in the mirror
At my age!
reflections of old follies,
timidity, audacities;
delights and regrets,
successes and failures,
done undone deeds;
Ah, all that crap
which made me up
which cooked me up
into the present shape
yet I live with a complaining heart;
so many desires still unfulfilled,
so many wishes that got killed
by the ruthless hand of time;
What can I do now
with my aching and shaking body?
The destination seems round the corner
no friend, no foe besides
to keep the fire of my ambitions
kindled;
Yet, I made a fool of myself
by glancing in the mirror
Only to find the broken edifice
of life now to be lifted
and dumped by someone
into a shallow narrow ditch,

… seriously?……….

Beautifully written.

wow very very good I really like this one alot. its so true. keep up the great work.

A person could go nuts trying to be what everyone else wants them to be. Learning to be ourselves will find us not perfection but happiness.