Comments on: Imperfections http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/ Fri, 01 Jun 2012 08:35:08 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Rebekah Lowell http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490239 Rebekah Lowell Tue, 19 Aug 2008 03:30:49 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490239 A person could go nuts trying to be what everyone else wants them to be. Learning to be ourselves will find us not perfection but happiness. A person could go nuts trying to be what everyone else wants them to be. Learning to be ourselves will find us not perfection but happiness.

]]> By: brandon http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490237 brandon Tue, 05 Aug 2008 21:44:06 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490237 wow very very good I really like this one alot. its so true. keep up the great work. wow very very good I really like this one alot. its so true. keep up the great work.

]]> By: Carissa http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490235 Carissa Wed, 09 Jul 2008 21:58:16 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490235 Beautifully written. Beautifully written.

]]> By: for real? http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490233 for real? Sat, 28 Jun 2008 23:24:37 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490233 ... seriously?.......... … seriously?……….

]]> By: mazHur http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490231 mazHur Sat, 28 Jun 2008 21:12:43 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490231 Enjoy reading this:<br /> <br /> http://english.agonia.net/index.php/poetry/1786912/index.html<br /> Looking in the mirror,,,<br /> poetry [ ]<br /> life,old age, memories,change,time and space,<br /> <br /> - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -<br /> by mazHur [ Mazhar Butt]<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Looking in the mirror<br /> <br /> by mazHur<br /> <br /> It made me laugh<br /> at myself;<br /> That was a deadly mistake<br /> Looking in the mirror<br /> At my age!<br /> reflections of old follies,<br /> timidity, audacities;<br /> delights and regrets,<br /> successes and failures,<br /> done undone deeds;<br /> Ah, all that crap<br /> which made me up<br /> which cooked me up<br /> into the present shape<br /> yet I live with a complaining heart;<br /> so many desires still unfulfilled,<br /> so many wishes that got killed<br /> by the ruthless hand of time;<br /> What can I do now<br /> with my aching and shaking body?<br /> The destination seems round the corner<br /> no friend, no foe besides<br /> to keep the fire of my ambitions<br /> kindled;<br /> Yet, I made a fool of myself<br /> by glancing in the mirror<br /> Only to find the broken edifice<br /> of life now to be lifted<br /> and dumped by someone<br /> into a shallow narrow ditch, Enjoy reading this:

http://english.agonia.net/index.php/poetry/1786912/index.html
Looking in the mirror,,,
poetry [ ]
life,old age, memories,change,time and space,

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by mazHur [ Mazhar Butt]

Looking in the mirror

by mazHur

It made me laugh
at myself;
That was a deadly mistake
Looking in the mirror
At my age!
reflections of old follies,
timidity, audacities;
delights and regrets,
successes and failures,
done undone deeds;
Ah, all that crap
which made me up
which cooked me up
into the present shape
yet I live with a complaining heart;
so many desires still unfulfilled,
so many wishes that got killed
by the ruthless hand of time;
What can I do now
with my aching and shaking body?
The destination seems round the corner
no friend, no foe besides
to keep the fire of my ambitions
kindled;
Yet, I made a fool of myself
by glancing in the mirror
Only to find the broken edifice
of life now to be lifted
and dumped by someone
into a shallow narrow ditch,

]]> By: mazhur http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490229 mazhur Sat, 28 Jun 2008 21:09:28 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490229 very nice! very nice!

]]> By: PR Mace http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490227 PR Mace Sat, 28 Jun 2008 04:32:34 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490227 Great work. You have skill with a poem. Great work. You have skill with a poem.

]]> By: Michael Key http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490225 Michael Key Tue, 24 Jun 2008 07:53:05 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490225 Very informative my friend you should be proud. Very informative my friend you should be proud.

]]> By: Casdok http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490223 Casdok Mon, 23 Jun 2008 15:31:49 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490223 Beautiful. Beautiful.

]]> By: Alaine Watson http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/comment-page-1/#comment-490221 Alaine Watson Fri, 20 Jun 2008 03:53:36 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/imperfections/#comment-490221 Great job. Your poem was beautiful. It is truly inspirational. Great job. Your poem was beautiful. It is truly inspirational.

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