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Imprisonment vs. Freedom

Taffy on Jul 1, 2009
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Diamonte Poem.

Imprisonment

Cold, harsh

Confining, dimming, binding

Lonely, empty-Truth, cherish

Learning, reveling, chasing

Joy, tears

Freedom

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  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 1, 2009

    Very clear. Good poem. Liz

  • revivor on Jul 3, 2009

    good start – interesting structure (play with different types) and good choice of words

  • Glassie on Jul 7, 2009

    I am no poet and therefore am unable to comment on the structure but the content was strong and impactual.

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