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Eye stare.

Nose nothing.

ya Ear it?

the tomfoolery of mixed senses.

BLECH.

that feels awful!

it’s crawly on my tongue,

as if it still lives!

that stabs my eardrum until

it cries red!

that dries my eyes

of all happiness

and that robs my fingers

of their once gentle nature.

That sucks.

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  • Themax on Nov 13, 2009

    ha ha very well written,Thanks :)

  • diamondpoet on Nov 13, 2009

    Brilliant I loved it.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 14, 2009

    Very good one. You have a good flair for writing.

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