Police deal with a murder at the crime scene.

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At the crime scene,

it was odd,

felt like a dream,

the dead girl’s clothes

were still being checked

for trace evidence,

trying not to let this death fail,

looking through the thick crust

of detail,

face pale,

it was a homicide,

in a cool, dry place,

first they thought it was a suicide,

but nevertheless it was such a waste,

a terrible loss,

the dead staring you in the face,

no luck, no trace.

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Comments (6)
  • Sammy2000 on Jul 22, 2009

    pa I really enjoyed this story poem it was real good

  • Millie1986 on Jul 23, 2009

    i agree this was very good

  • TikiCarter on Jul 23, 2009

    this was very well written

  • Evelyn M Carter on Jul 25, 2009

    Powerful! Nice Pic too (meaning it goes well with words…)!
    Good Job. Thanks for the share! :)

  • Stacey Watts on Jul 25, 2009

    Very well written piece. Very intriguing words.

  • Lowell on Jul 25, 2009

    wow very dramatic piece

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