In facing challenges of reality…

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Stones are torn

Crumpled to ashes

Rivers were stretched

As it reached every line

Pearls were thrown

As if no value on its own

The clouds mourned

As the sky turned sour

But in between mountains

Courage stood still

Brighter than before.

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  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 9, 2009

    Great work! That was wonderful and lovely poem..Well done!
    ..your pics too small..shud x 10..Thanx 4 sharing

  • Tarra Buluran on Mar 9, 2009

    Thanks for your comment, Mr Ghaz. Promise to make it larger next time.

  • Anne McNew on Mar 10, 2009

    such a great poem. I agree with Ghaz, next time make it a little bit larger…

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 10, 2009

    What a lovely poem. I particularly liked the end. Well done.

    Christine

  • Tarra Buluran on Mar 10, 2009

    Thanks to you, too, Christine.

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