In Confrontation

Sourav on Oct 14, 2009

Tags: betrayal, dream, hatred, In Confrontation, Life, love, Nightmare, poem, Poetry, Sourav RC

Poetry By Sourav RC.

Mountains – too high to climb
Tears make a deep river
Your selfish emotions block the way-
Dark circle of nasty thoughts;
Hounded by your hatred
Abused like heinous sin
Sibilates as God’s mistake
You- make me feel like a vice;

But with your all these assertions
When you kill my soul
I rise like an impossible dream
Like your worst nightmare;
I enlighten my virtue
To liberate my mind from your betrayal
Now you are the victim of your own mistakes
And defeat stares straight at our face.

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Christine Ramsay on Oct 14, 2009
A very powerful and emotional poem. Well done.

Christine
ken bultman on Oct 14, 2009
Whoa, sounds angry.
Mr Ghaz on Oct 14, 2009
I agree..this is unique and so powerful piece..enjoyed it!
lillyrose on Oct 14, 2009
your scary! but the poem was great!
Jenny Heart on Oct 14, 2009
I agree with Christine. Great one!
ashan1614 on Oct 14, 2009
This does sound angry, but rightfully so. It is human nature to want to see those who have harmed us get their just “reward”.
chitragopi on Oct 14, 2009
‘When you kill my soul
I rise like an impossible dream’
I like these words.
Darla Cooke on Oct 14, 2009
Great poem!
giftarist on Oct 14, 2009
Very expressed.. great piece!
Frances Lawrence on Oct 14, 2009
I loved your choice of language. Very nice poem
LOVELYHONEY on Oct 14, 2009
wow wow wow wow wow………..

carrry on those wows

till home come all cows….//////…….

ur ENGLISH IS far superior

to ordinary guys like me

who hardly are able

to understand it

PAR EXCELLENCE SIR
Grace Kathryn on Oct 14, 2009
I love your choice of words. Let us all hang on to the impossible dream.
Lady Sunshine on Oct 14, 2009
Interesting, Sourav.
Aleena on Oct 14, 2009
Very nice; spiteful. I like it!
cebuanaeyez on Oct 14, 2009
the words are deep and expressed such strong emotions (well done)
cebuanaeyez on Oct 14, 2009
The words are deep and expressed such strong emotions. Well done.
Guy Hogan on Oct 14, 2009
This seems to be a poem about a relationship that will never work.
WriteEditSeek on Oct 15, 2009
A lot of powerful emotions welling up in this poem.
diamondpoet on Nov 13, 2009
Extrodinary piece of work.

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