The wind blows, it pushes down the valley
to a white confused
fading in the air of a sky.

The wind blows, it pushes down the valley
to a white confused
fading in the air of a sky
late summer
as scattered white clouds,
sheep grazing.

Look who started
with a suitcase of hope
and each spring expect
like the swallows, for their return.

The door of your thoughts,
pretending to sleep, remember
a past that it tries to grasp
hands too tired to
squeeze the air of a frosty winter
smiling and talking about the spring
had long hair, blond as wheat
and a laugh like a fresh stream.

Grazed sheep on the mountains
where hope fed land
too arid to cultivate,
here, where I step back,
Where am I listening to the wind,
and the story,
among the rocks of an abandoned house,
I get lost in eco of the memory.

Healthy food for memory                         Food for healthy skin

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Comments (12)
  • PSingh1990 on Aug 23, 2010

    Nice one……

    thanks for share.

  • webseowriters on Aug 23, 2010

    Thanks for such a nice share

  • Inxxu on Aug 23, 2010

    very deep thoughts, makes me wonder about my memories as well ! I quess that this is the main goal…make your readers wonder and take them back, where is good to be!

    Anyway, great work!

  • Likha on Aug 23, 2010

    You have good word choices… smooth flow. Nice job.

  • mysocalledlife on Aug 23, 2010

    you sure knows how to play with words and wove them into one great piece! nice job

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Aug 23, 2010

    Excellent choice of words and beautifully written.

  • carissimi on Aug 23, 2010

    very lovely indeed!

  • giftarist on Aug 23, 2010

    Very smooth flow. Great one, friend.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Aug 24, 2010

    Very good lines.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Aug 25, 2010

    lovely and abstract
    very nice

  • heidiefernandez on Aug 29, 2010

    Beautiful……..

  • visionvision on Aug 31, 2010

    u won another award

    may u do

    many more

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