There was no other customer but me in that spa, one evening.

A lodge of smoke,
to make me choke;
From heated stone
Poured water on.

A cold rub helps,
but my heart yelps:
I am alone
In this salon.

Outside, the Moon,
inside, some tune—
Soothing the stressed;
giving me rest.

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  • genechan on Aug 15, 2009

    nice lyrics for a spa commercial jingle.

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