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In Praise of my Sister in Spirit

MrZebra84 on Mar 30, 2009
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A poem that will hopefully cheer up one of my dearest friends.

My beloved big sister

Child of joy

Of Wisdom

My long trusted confidante

Intertwined

We become

My rock through the worst of it

With light you

Did guide me

My beautiful tapestry

That I weave

Inside me

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  • clay hurtubise on Mar 30, 2009

    Thanks for that. I loved my sister dearly and miss her so.
    Clay

  • jdesormes on Mar 30, 2009

    this is a beautiful poem.

  • Debra. on Mar 31, 2009

    Beautiful poem. Nice play on words. I love the the warmth expressed through your feelings for your poem.

  • M J katz on Mar 31, 2009

    Hi MrZebra 84! The love and respect you feel for this sister in spirit is very apparent in your poem. You did an excellent job in conveying your feelings to the reader! :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 31, 2009

    A wonderful tribute to that sister. It describes perfectly the feelings I have for my brothers too.

    Christine

  • kate smedley on Mar 31, 2009

    Beautiful poem, I have a friend who is my sister in spirit,I love the image of the tapestry.

  • Betty Carew on Mar 31, 2009

    Beautiful poem MrZ

  • OhSugar on Mar 31, 2009

    This such a beautiful poem and a beautiful relationship you have with your sister. I enjoyed reading it.

    OhSugar

  • monica55 on Mar 31, 2009

    Such beautiful thoughts and a wonderful poem.
    Monica

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