She woke up with an intruder in the house.

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She woke up at the sound

of foot-steps coming down,

confused, she called out a name,

it rattled her emotions just the same,

in that instant of dark silence,

fear came,

put her in a mental trance,

before she had a chance

to cry out for help,

her resilience was caged,

he struck her,

he was enraged,

in stunned pain,

her life would drain.

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  • Evelyn M Carter on Jun 24, 2009

    I liked this one Frank.

  • Sammy2000 on Jun 25, 2009

    I feel the realness

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 29, 2009

    Wow, you do a great job getting a big picture across with limited words.
    Thanks,
    Clay

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