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Alone where my dark mind stands still

The mist of fear lingers in my ears

The gloomy waters that cover my feet

What left of yours are buried beneath.

Abreast the cherry sky my blood is drawn

To find your soul from dusk until dawn

But the shades of lightning soon passes by

And her twin thunder goes on to live by.

Thank the heavens it strongly interferes

And solemnly the face of God appears

In the arms of faith I renew myself

As I embrace the new life I have to shed.

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  • Unofre Pili on Mar 30, 2009

    That’s a very fine piece. Yes, faith is our chariot to the transcendence, making the mystery of life a little easier to understand.

  • Betty Carew on Mar 30, 2009

    Absolutely beautiful Tarra a very serene read.

  • rajeev bhargava on Mar 30, 2009

    a beautiful and deep poem. the choice of words are crisp and sound. i like it.

  • Mervin on Mar 30, 2009

    A very inspiring piece.

  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 30, 2009

    Great work! That was lovely and well presented poem..I loved it! nice pics too. Thanx for sharing

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Mar 30, 2009

    This is so beautiful. Heartfelt!

  • kate smedley on Mar 30, 2009

    lovely heartfelt poem

  • Darla Smith on Mar 30, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • George W Whitehead on Mar 30, 2009

    A beautiful piece, Tarra.

  • Fresh Writing on Mar 30, 2009

    Very heartfelt and sincere…excellent creation, Tarra.

    -Fresh Writing

  • Mary Antonette on Mar 30, 2009

    nice one… keep it up!

    :-)

  • Liane Schmidt on Mar 30, 2009

    Beautiful work – spiritual*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • rutherfranc on Mar 31, 2009

    great expression of your faith.. glad to know that in God you trust..

  • maranatha on Mar 31, 2009

    In the arms of faith I am renewed daily. Never let go. Loved this.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 31, 2009

    A beautifully written poem. I love the imagery.

    Christine

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Mar 31, 2009

    So refreshingly beautiful, thanks.

  • cleblanc on Mar 31, 2009

    beautiful.

  • OhSugar on Mar 31, 2009

    Absoulutely beautiful, and filled with inspiration. The photo is very complimentary to your piece.

  • Sheila M on Apr 15, 2009

    Very beautiful, spiritual piece

  • Momma Tells on May 9, 2009

    Faith – sure of what we hope for, and certain of what we do not see. (Hebrews 11:1) Thanks for writing about it!

    My Best to you,
    Momma Tells

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