In The Balance

ashan1614 on Jan 12, 2010

Tags: assets, balance, liabilities, scales, weigh

Assets versus liabilities. It’s time to weigh in. Some folks are going to come up short.

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Missed

Dismissed

Respected

Dishonored

Consideration

Disregard

Affection

Disdain

Appreciative

Disgruntled

Encouragement

Discouragement

Comfort

Disconsolation

Peace

Discord

Your obvious lack clearly displayed

In total for all to see

Your life as a whole series of “dis”

Contrary to everything you vowed

And to the picture you tried to paint

For the world outside these walls

You promised support, but gave suppression

To cherish; but rather devalued

To forsake all others (that turned out well)

Judgment day has finally come

You have been weighed in the balance

And have come up wanting

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diamondpoet on Jan 12, 2010
I am so glad that when judgement day comes, this will not apply to me. It’s never too late to change and I would say time is running out. Great work.
ceegirl on Jan 12, 2010
clever work
Aldrin A Wilding West on Jan 12, 2010
Get out once and for all. Free yourself !! This fella obviously doesn’t deserve you anymore. Give yourself to someone who does, and make them very, very happy.
T. S. Lewis on Jan 12, 2010
He carries a heavy burden
AcidSemantics on Jan 12, 2010
wow, i love the beginning how you seamed the different words, that was beautiful, this made me think and a good motivational piece for sure, i really love how you use judgement day…
Aldrin A Wilding West on Jan 12, 2010
Seems like you’ve made your pros and cons list, and the cons have it. Might be time for ultimatums or exits? Good piece again Andrea.

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Val Mills on Jan 12, 2010
Really enjoyed the poem and had to rally laugh at the YOU SUCK at the end.
ashan1614 on Jan 12, 2010
Val,

When the “YOU SUCK” picture came up in the image suggestion box, I just knew I had to use it! It sums up my feelings perfectly!
ken bultman on Jan 12, 2010
Pitiful. I liked the sailboat analogy much better. This is putting your dirty laundry out in the open where it doesn’t belong. If you don’t like your man…get shut of him and let us out of it.
joyhyena29 on Jan 12, 2010
great post^^
Debra. on Jan 12, 2010
Wow, now that’s a very unique and clever way to express yourself, and what a fine job you’ve done, Andrea!. I hope you give him this poem!
Christine Ramsay on Jan 13, 2010
A very passionate piece. You are better on your own.

Christine
Christine Ramsay on Jan 13, 2010
A very passionate piece. You are better on your own.

Christine
Christine Ramsay on Jan 13, 2010
A very passionate piece. You are better on your own.

Christine
The Last Ogre on Jan 13, 2010
Good poem. Very passionate indeed.
lillyrose on Jan 13, 2010
you go girl! you are the one with the choices!
Darla Cooke on Jan 13, 2010
Very good!
thuanynguyen on Jan 14, 2010
Amazing piece! I love it!
CA Johnson on Jan 14, 2010
This is amazing. You can clearly tell how passionate you are about your situation.
qasimdharamsy on Jan 16, 2010
Nice one…great work…
AlmaG on Jan 20, 2010
Great poem! That “You suck” pic is funny.
deep blue on Jan 22, 2010
Life has its limits. Well expressed thoughts.

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