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In The Beginning

bhstwo on Jun 13, 2010
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This is a poem that I wrote when I was feeling hurt.

In the beginning

When I first touch you, I kiss

In the beginning

When I first saw you, I loved you.

In the beginning 

When I first dated you, you hurted me

In the beginning

When it was over, you left me

In the beginning

When you didn’t answer, I feel empty

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  • sara20 on Jun 14, 2010

    Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

    Thanks and cheers.
    Sara

  • Veraelaine on Jun 14, 2010

    You convey your feelings very well.

    Thanks for sharing.

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