Acrostic vampire poem.

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In the middle of the night

Nocturnal creatures come to visit

 

They appear while we’re sleeping

Haunting our dreams each night

Eerie nightmares they provoke

 

Moving silently across the room

Immortal beings of the darkness

Demons with yellow glowing eyes

Destined to thirst for human blood

Lethal monsters with deadly fangs

Eternal creatures of the night

 

Out of the darkness they appear

Forced to forever shun the sunlight

 

They burst forth from their graves

Hungering for the taste of blood

Evil demons doomed with no souls

 

Nocturnal beasts roaming free

Invading our peaceful world

Greeting us with delicate kisses

Hypnotic and sensual creatures

Tempting us with eternal life

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  • drelayaraja on Feb 11, 2010

    Great post friend :)

  • ganeshgolha on Feb 11, 2010

    Nice poem,great share

  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Feb 11, 2010

    Wow Darla, interesting write here and makes me resistive towards going to bed for sleep lol. Thank You for sharing your wonderful writing with us all and more importantly for giving us more of you…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Feb 11, 2010

    Darla, it’s really a great poem.

  • chellsy on Feb 11, 2010

    this very nice poem darla.thanks for sharing

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 11, 2010

    Inspired and atmospheric acrostic, great choice for it too!

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 11, 2010

    another good entry… nice poem!

  • diamondpoet on Feb 11, 2010

    Eerie piece.

  • STEVE666 on Feb 11, 2010

    Nice acrostic, Darla.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 11, 2010

    must be good if Kate says so

    i dont like eerie ones

    scary weaker heart u know

    light hearted i meant

    gr8888888888888 as always

    ROMANCE SUITS U MORE

    YOUR SPECIALITY YES NO??

    LHLHLH

  • AlmaG on Feb 11, 2010

    Wonderful acrostic poem :)

  • albert1jemi on Feb 11, 2010

    nice poem

  • Brenda Nelson on Feb 12, 2010

    spooky.

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 12, 2010

    Wonderful piece…very nice…

  • petercurtis97 on Feb 12, 2010

    Interesting piece.

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 12, 2010

    So vivid and highly imaginative.

  • CA Johnson on Feb 12, 2010

    What an interesting poem about vampires. Great job!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 13, 2010

    LH AGAIN GR8888888888 THIS TIME

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