Only in moonlight will I ever want you. The moonlight is something different, it makes one more courageous, and less self-preserved.

Everything changes once darkness falls.

As if a person undergoes a new idenity.

When the full moon arises, I feel as if,

By some miricle, more alive.

My courage goes up,

And my self-preservation goes down.

I just want to see your face,

In the moonlight, with with mine.

Possibly the reflection in the lake.

I just  want you,

But I can only have you in the moonlight

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  • Assemba on Nov 11, 2008

    Cool! Loved reading it!

  • BC Doan on Nov 11, 2008

    Very pretty, Alexa!

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 11, 2008

    Beautiful poem, take care!

  • brianq28 on Nov 11, 2008

    that was very heart felt i loved it keep up the good work.

  • joy rousseeuw nov.11 2008 on Nov 11, 2008

    i loved it,shan

  • Will Gray on Nov 11, 2008

    Wonderful imagery and a great write!

  • valli on Nov 11, 2008

    Nice poem.

  • Peter Cimino on Nov 11, 2008

    Beautiful poem.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Nov 11, 2008

    nice thought,thanks Alexa

  • Judy Sheldon on Nov 11, 2008

    Very pretty. I somehow felt as if I was peeking in on a private scene.

  • Jo Bingham on Nov 11, 2008

    Beautiful :O)

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 12, 2008

    Very nice, Take care, Ruby

  • HatedNation on Nov 13, 2008

    I really liked this, thank you!

  • joystick7 on Nov 16, 2008

    Good one!

  • jackalina on Nov 17, 2008

    Heart felt work, liked this poem it was quiet mystical.

  • Parish Loveless on Dec 27, 2008

    beautiful

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