In This World I See..

Lovelies240 on Jan 27, 2012

Tags: Life, love, palindrome, Poetry, what i see, world

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This poem is dedicated to a challenge for Palindrome Poetry.

Lovely lies

Enchanting despise

In this world I see

What Imagination brings

Rose buds with thorns

Devils with wings;

Angels with horns

Love is worn

Angels with horns

Devils with wings

Rose buds with thorns

What imagination brings

In this world I see

Enchanting despise

Lovely lies.

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PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 27, 2012
I like this. It’s really good, but the Palindrome form is a bit harder than that lol. Very good try though. The message is pretty deep. Welcome to the challenges lady.
Lovelies240 on Jan 27, 2012
Aw I thought I almost nailed it. Good shot though at least lol. Doesn’t hurt to try.
Aroosa Gloomy on Jan 29, 2012
very well dear
Vinaya Ghimire on Feb 21, 2012
Loved the inherent irony in this composition.

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