In Your Hands

Sheila M on May 23, 2009

Becoming more within the beauty of love.

(Image from photobucket by HolyAnna)

Within your smile, I’m

at peace with the world’s cruel

(ty) intentions of hate.

You take the bitter

taste of betrayal off my

tongues taste of life past.

I can see beyond

my own nose to spite my face

of fear, lingering.

Within you there is

freedom to become whats been

hidden for so long.

In your hands you hold

the piece that makes it complete

me, if you are strong enough.

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Comments (18)

Mr Ghaz on May 23, 2009
Excellent!!..that was lovely and wonderful poem. LOV it..well done and thanks for sharing this work.
ken bultman on May 23, 2009
Good things will come to good people. Nice poem.
Shautina Palm on May 23, 2009
this is very nice good job
Pinaki Ghosh on May 23, 2009
Good one
CHAN LEE PENG on May 23, 2009
I like this poem. It reflects the beauty of love.
STEVE666 on May 23, 2009
Positive words, Sheila.
Christine Ramsay on May 23, 2009
A beautifully written poem about being positive in love.

Christine
shadlock on May 23, 2009
Very well written. Good feeling in the words.
Peter Cimino on May 23, 2009
Yet another beauty! You leave me speechless sometimes!! xoxo
Melody SJAL on May 23, 2009
Stunning!
clay hurtubise on May 23, 2009
Nice, upbeat piece.
Thanks,
Clay
skylite on May 23, 2009
Very Nice
Ruby Hawk on May 24, 2009
well said, love it.
Poetic Enigma on May 24, 2009
Beautiful piece,
very well said
Mike on May 25, 2009
Beautiful and inspiring.
Kate Smedley on May 26, 2009
Touching poem about love …
swatilohani on May 26, 2009
loved it dear
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on May 28, 2009
That was very clever the way you run on the lines without affecting the meter or clouding the voice.

I enjoyed this very much and will ready again. Nicely done!

J

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